Friday, November 16, 2012

MY sweet Daughter's Touching Story.....




Dear Friends
I was moved by seeing my daughter's story she presented us on our Marriage 25th Anniversary today the 16th Nov 2012.

I am sharing her story with you in my blog....


A small story or a one-shot about me and my life with my parents~
WARNING! INCLUDES FANTASY, NOTHING FROM REAL LIFE, WELL, THIS USED TO BE MY FANTASY AND THE FEELINGS I FELT WERE REAL SO NO COMPLAINTS…>W<
Paradise always lies where you are

“This is paradise!” it really was… this was the home for all kids that yet have to be born, I was one amongst those who have a lot of time left until they are born, in that mean time, we used to play hide and seek, play with alchemy and magic, and all sorts of stuff. I loved that place. It was really fun, we could do whatever we want, have how much food we want, and it was paradise. 

But… that one day… God called for me… and he told it’s time to leave and go to earth… I was literally shocked when he said me so… “b-b-but, there is no other place like paradise! I love being here!” “…” he didn’t say anything… “I don’t want to leave! Its boring to be born there!!” he spoke up “my child… you will have more fun there… I promise…” I didn’t want to leave and so I urged him even more… “I don’t want to!!” “I promised didn’t I? you will love being there instead of here… so much you don’t want to leave earth…” I looked up to him in disagreement, I wondered if he was even telling the truth… heck! What am I thinking!? He will always say the truth no matter what! “Promise?” I showed my pinky finger to him as he was a bit surprised but later, 

He let out a chuckle as he wrapped his pinky finger around mine… “Promise” he had a warm smile on as he escorted me out of paradise… we went through the world of sinners which is called ‘Hell’, I heard it from my friends, they told me it was really scary there, but it was much more scary seeing it myself… my next stop… earth… before I dropped down… God said that… “The couple you’re seeing down there… it has already been 12 ½ years after marriage…” “Whoa! That’s a long time! Didn’t they have any kids…?” I regretted it when I asked that question because his answer was… “No… 2 failed attempts already…” “…” silence… that was it… decision made… I felt really sad for them… I wonder if it was any other kid, will they take care of them…? Well I would absolutely… “So, isn’t it the time for you to be going now..?” he shot at me with a heartwarming smile as I just nodded my head to his question… before I dropped down into earth, God told me… “I wanted you to be their child as you would help them through any problem… but… that doesn’t mean you wouldn’t cross any problems yourself… you should choose your paths wisely my child… and learn with every mistake… do you understand?” I was hesitant at giving my answer… “…….” I couldn’t open my mouth… the words ‘yes I understand’ didn’t come out… as if they were stuck in my throat…I wasn’t scared… but something sent chills up my spine… “My child…?” I jerked and tried to stay calm but failed miserably… “Yes…I understand…” he gave a warm smile… “good, I was worried, now best of luck!” before I went down to earth I looked back at him and smiled… that was the last time I saw him… waving back at me as I left… “I’m going to face a lot of troubles huh..?” that’s when I saw my parents… they were so happy to see me… and me… I thought I felt a tingle in my heart as if… 

I was blessed with one of the best parents in the world… “A-a-a-a-a-abbu!” my father was overjoyed when I called his name… “a-a-a-a-ammi!” my mom… was overjoyed as well… and me…? Heh… just like any other baby… I was totally clueless and so innocent… I did face many hurdles on my way here on earth… living here is kind of hard, but I have learned it’s better to face than to run away… that… which I have learned from my dad… and “be nice to people and they will be nice to you”… which I have learned from my mom… I am really blessed with a strong, filled with pride, confident father and a sweet, cute, kind mother… and what am I? a mix of both the personalities… “Come on suru! Your bus is waiting for you!” a call from my dad… “Okay! I’m going down! Bye abbu! Bye ammi!” I head down to my bus… “Gosh! That driver tells he comes early but makes me wait at least 10 mins!” I thought to myself… today, I look back to how I was before… what god said affected me then… but now I can bravely say… “I can face whatever hurdles come in my way!” that’s right… and… I can also say… “Dear past self, you were dearly mistaken when you said you weren’t going to have any fun here on earth… earth is a billion times more fun than paradise… because… with my parents here… with how they have blessed me… I’m really happy…” I look up and smile at the sky because I know god is watching… “… Promise fulfilled” thank you… for blessing me with my parents… I don’t know how to thank you… and… I have learned and experienced from god… “Paradise lies where your parents are…” heh… absolutely right… “Paradise always lies where you are”
-From your dear Suraiya (aka- Suru)

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  1. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... dont mistake...I was not cluless..but the happy tears just rolled out from my heart like this when i read the nice gift. Superb Superb, it doesn't require age..it requires man"age"ble ability to arrange the expression in the words. Azad sir..Suru is the perfect gift by the almighty. and Dear Suru you are right..paradise is where the parents are. Journey from Paradise to Parentise is just awesome. I love this write up very much.

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    1. Super comments and Suru..yes no doubt has some writing skills.. I shall convey your blessings to her, thank you Srikanth.

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  2. I cant believe this girl is just 12-13 year old kid...This writing about parents, make me to think, her a well machured soul in her.... :) Really loved parents u have dear Suraiya...aswell as lovely daughter to our Azad Bhai... Long live all... Happy to read this .. :)

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    1. Thank you Sudeepa...thagyamma...nimmellara aasheervaada avlige...haaraike namage

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  3. wah wah what a story from a kid, it is really heart touching . hat off to her feeling in this story. I promise she will be a great writer one day .Please convey my hearty blessings to her.My good wishes to you and your family for this good and healthy relationship.

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    1. Thanks Balu...nimma abhimaanakke nimma aasheervaadavanna haage suruge talupistene

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  4. Sir,really it is a beautiful gift from your daughter.she has nicely hold the feelings and love in this story.... Once again,happy wishes to you all...

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    1. Dhanyavaada Girish..nimma aasheervaada haaraikege dhanyavaada mattomme

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  5. I’m touched with her write up sir.. Hats off to u suru….. Sir most Memorable gift on ur anniversary..:)

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  6. I actually was in tears after reading her story...she simply gave me a surprise.. she wrote it directly on computer and left the computer...as it is...and she knew after she leaves, I would use the computer, when I activated the monitor....!!! there it was the STORY...
    Thanks Suguna Nimma abhimaankke mattu avalige aasheervadakke...
    AND
    For alovely Gift of Ashoka Pillar
    The symbol of India OUR MOTHER LAND
    The four lions represent the four eyes of Parents or FOUR legs of Mom-Dad, who see all good and who support all good for the Best of their Children...Nice Gift indeed, Thanks you

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  7. Azad sir,
    Really a gift for you from almighty is Suru... You are lucky to have her... wonderful skill of writting and she has the heart to feel your love...God bless her...

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    1. ಹೌದು ದಿನಕರ್, we are proud of her, she has God given gift of writing skill, need to sharpen that...
      Thank you for you wishes and blessings to Suru

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  8. ಜಲನಯನ,
    ಇದು ಕತೆಯಲ್ಲ,ನಿಮ್ಮ ಮಗುವಿನ ಮನದಾಳದ ಭಾವನೆ ಕಥಾರೂಪವಾಗಿ ಹೊರಬಂದಿದೆ. ಎಂತಹ ಮಾರ್ಮಿಕ ಕತೆಯನ್ನು ಈ ಪುಟ್ಟ ಹುಡುಗಿ ಬರೆದಿದ್ದಾಳಲ್ಲ! ಕತೆ ಮುದ್ದಾಗಿರುವಂತೆ, ನಿಮ್ಮ ಮಗಳೂ ಮುದ್ದಾಗಿದ್ದಾಳೆ. ಇಂತಹ ಪ್ರತಿಭಾವಂತ,ಸಂವೇದನಾಶೀಲ,ಮುದ್ದು ಮಗಳನ್ನು ಪಡೆದ ನೀವೇ ಧನ್ಯರು!

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  9. ಸುನಾಥಣ್ಣ ನಿಮ್ಮ ಆಶೀರ್ವಾದವನ್ನು ಅವಳಿಗೆ ತಲುಪಿಸುತ್ತೇನೆ ಹಾಗೆಯೇ ನನ್ನ ಆಭಾರ ವ್ಯಕ್ತಪಡಿಸುತ್ತೇನೆ. ನಿಮ್ಮ ಹಾರೈಕೆ ಆಶೀರ್ವಾದಕ್ಕೆ

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  10. ಆಜಾದೂ...

    ಭಾವನೆಗಳನ್ನು ನನಗೆ ಇಂಗ್ಲೀಷಿನಲ್ಲಿ ಹೇಳಲಿಕ್ಕೆ ಕಷ್ಟ...
    ಆದರೆ ಅರ್ಥ ಮಾಡಿಕೊಳ್ಳಬಲ್ಲೆ...

    ಪುಟ್ಟಿ ಬರೆದ ಕಥನ ಓದಿದೆ...

    ಕಣ್ಣಲ್ಲಿ ನೀರಾಡಿತು...

    ಆಶಾ ಓದಿದಳು... ಅವಳೂ ಸಹ ಖುಷಿ ಪಟ್ಟಳು... ಕಣ್ಣಲ್ಲಿ ನೀರು ಜಿನುಗಿತು..

    ಆಯಿಯಂತೂ ಹೃದಯ ತುಂಬಾ ಹರಸಿದ್ದಾಳೆ...
    ನಿಮ್ಮ ಸಂಸಾರ ಯಾವಾಗಲೂ ಸಂತೋಷದಿಂದ ಇರಲಿ ಅಂತ...

    ದೇವರು ನಿಮ್ಮ ಎಲ್ಲ ಆಸೆ ಕನಸುಗಳನ್ನು ನನಸಾಗಿಸಲಿ....
    ಇದು ನಮ್ಮೆಲ್ಲರ ಶುಭ ಹಾರೈಕೆ....

    ಪುಟ್ಟಿಯ ಪ್ರತಿಭೆಗೆ ನಮ್ಮೆಲ್ಲರ ಶುಭಾಶೀರ್ವಾದಗಳು ....

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    1. ಸ್ಪಂದನೆ, ಆಪ್ಯಾಯತೆ, ಸಂಬಂಧಗಳನ್ನು ಹತ್ತಿರದಿಂದ ನೋಡಿ ಅನುಭವಿಸುವ ನಿಮ್ಮೆಲ್ಲರ ಆತ್ಮೀಯತೆಗೆ ನಮನ

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  11. ಭಾಗ್ಯವಂತರು ನೀವೇ ಭಾಗ್ಯವಂತರು.

    ಓದುತ್ತಾ ಓದುತ್ತಾ ಮನಸು ಆರ್ಧ್ರವಾಯ್ತು, ಮೂಕವಾಯಿತು. ನನಗೂ ಮಗಳಿರಬಾರದೇ ಎಂದೂ ಅನಿಸಿತು.

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  12. ತಂದೆ ತಾಯಿ ಮನಸನ್ನು ಸುಲಭವಾಗಿ ಅರ್ಥ ಮಾಡಿಕೊಳ್ಳುವ ದೈವದತ್ತ ವರ ಹೆಣ್ಣು ಮಕ್ಕಳಿಗಿರುತ್ತದೆ. ನಿಮಗೂ ಈ ಭಾಗ್ಯ ಒದಗಲಿ ಬದರಿ

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  13. ತಂದೆ ತಾಯರ ಪ್ರೀತಿಯನ್ನು " ಮಗಳು " ಎಂದೂ ಮರೆಯುವುದಿಲ್ಲಾ.

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    1. ಎಮ್ಮೆಸ್ ಸರ್ ನಿಮ್ಮ ಅಶೀರ್ವಾದಕ್ಕೆ ಧನ್ಯವಾದ... ನಮ್ಮ ಹೊಸ ಮನೆಗೂ ಬಂದು ಹರಸಿದಿರಿ..ಅದು ನಿಮ್ಮ ಹಿರಿತನ ಆತ್ಮೀಯತೆ.

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  14. ಮನದಾಳದ ಭಾವನೆಗಳು ಸುಂದರವಾಗಿ ಹೊರ ಹೊಮ್ಮಿವೆ.
    ಮಾತಾಪಿತರಿರುವ ಸ್ಥಾನವೇ ದೇವಸ್ಥಾನ!
    ನಿಜವಾಗಿಯೂ ಬೇಕೆ ಅನ್ಯ ತೀರ್ಥಸ್ಥಾನ?
    ಮಾತಾಪಿತರನ್ನರಿತು ಬಾಳುವ ಮಕ್ಕಳಿರಲು, ಮಕ್ಕಳ ಭಾವನೆಗಳಿಗೆ ಸ್ಪಂದಿಸುವ ಮಾತಾಪಿತರಿರಲು, ಸ್ವರ್ಗ ಬೇರೋಂದಿಲ್ಲ. ಇಷ್ಟು ಚಿಕ್ಕ ವಯಸ್ಸಿನಲ್ಲಿಯೇ ಅಪಾರ ಅರಿವನ್ನು ಪ್ರದರ್ಶಿಸುತ್ತಿರುವ ಮಗುವಿಗೆ ಹಾರ್ದಿಕ ಶುಭ್ಹ ಹಾರೈಕೆಗಳು. ಮಾತಾಪಿತರೀರ್ವರಿಗೂ ಅಭಿನಂದನೆಗಳು!

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    1. ಸುರೇಶ್, ನಿಮ್ಮ ಆತ್ಮೀಯ ಮಾತಿಗೆ ಹಾರೈಕೆಗೆ ಮತ್ತು ಸುರು-ನನ್ನು ಅಶೀರ್ವದಿಸಿದಕ್ಕೆ ಮನಃಪೂರ್ವಕ ಧನ್ಯವಾದಗಳು.

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  15. ಈ ಪುಟ್ಟು ನಿರಂತರ ಹೀಗೇ ಬೆಳೆಯಲಿ ಆಝಾದ್ ಭೈಯ್ಯಾ.. ನಿಮ್ಮ ಸಂಭ್ರಮದ ಸಂಸಾರದಲ್ಲಿ ನಗು ಹೊಳೆಯಾಗಿ ಹರಿಯುತ್ತಿರಲಿ...

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  16. oh just loved it Azad Bhai...love to her....ಬೆಳೆಯುವ ಪೈರು ಮೊಳಕೆಯಲ್ಲೇ ಅಂತ ಹೇಳುತ್ತಾರಲ್ಲವಾ?? She shows signs of becoming a great writer...
    the bestest gift to you and Abida..
    loads of love
    :-)
    ms

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    1. ಮಾಲತಿ ನಿಮ್ಮ ಬೆಂಬಲ, ಅಬಿಮಾನ ಮತ್ತು ಅಶೀರ್ವಾದಕ್ಕೆ ಸುರುವತಿಯಿಂದ ನನ್ನ ಧನ್ಯವಾದ. ಹಾಗೆಯೇ ನಮ್ಮದೂ.

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  17. ಬಹಳ ಚೆನ್ನಾಗಿ ಬರೆದಿದ್ದಾಳೆ. ಸುಂದರ ಅಭಿವ್ಯಕ್ತಿ.. ಒಳ್ಳೇದಾಗಲಿ..
    ನಿಮ್ಮ ೨೫ನೇ ವರ್ಷದ ವಿವಾಹ ವಾರ್ಷಿಕೋತ್ಸವಕ್ಕೆ ಅಭಿನಂದನೆಗಳು :)

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    1. ಹರೀಶ್ ಥ್ಯಾಂಕ್ಸ್..ನಿಮ್ಮ ಹಾರೈಕೆಗೆ

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  18. ಮಿಂಚುಳ್ಳಿ ಧನ್ಯವಾದ ನಿಮ್ಮ ಅಭಿಮಾನಕ್ಕೆ.

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  19. Very matured one ! ,,,really i cant believ at d age of dis she can feel so n shows dem in dese wonderful heart touching words ,,,
    no words to say more dan dis sir ,,,
    Thumbs up to you and your sweet daughter :)may God bless her wid more health and happiness:)

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    1. Bhagya, thank you very much... even I was touched and speechless. She just said, abbu want to use your lap top for a while, I said OK and let her do that while I watched a movies over the TV. I realized only after half way that she has gone for doing her home work in her study room. When I activated the screen, saw this article of her's ....read it and was not believing my own eyes..., yes I knew she writes a bit but not this way of making a wonderful beginning, go though the wishes, feel proud of us, thank God and end wishing us... I was in tears... my wife asked was shocked..she asked..what happened...??? I showed her the story, she too was like me.
      I made up my mind not to touch even a word but simply copy and paste to facebook and to my blog (bhavamanthana).
      Thank you for the blessings and wishes.

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  20. Very matured writing, the flow and the choice of words are simply outstanding. This would embarrass many established English writers I am sure! Let her read good English literature and books, which I am sure she must be doing already. May god bless her and proud parents!

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    1. Thank you Kishan for your affection and wishes. She has developed this habit of writing..and yes as u said she needs to get nurtured..I am aware of that...
      Thank you. again.

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  21. Dear Suru,
    Heart touching.... "You are the Best"
    Appreciate your thoughts and love for your parents.
    Beyond this is the Personality and Positive Attitudes you have developed towards Life. May god bless with you Sweet Heart.

    Dear Azad Sir,
    You are Blessed and a proud parent. Your upbringing is all this.

    .......Tears Am unable to Stop and I love my DAD............

    Roopa

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    1. Roopa, that was really a surprize for us. Infact afternoon that day she didnt even give a hint.
      Thanks for your blessings

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  22. Suru I just love you kanda for what you are!!! loads loads of love to you kiddu. :)

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    1. Ur blessings and Love Convyed Jayakka, thanks a lot

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  23. ತಂದೆ ತಾಯಿಯಾಗಿ ನೀವುಗಳು ಗೆದ್ದಿರಿ
    ಮಗಳಾಗಿ ಅವರೂ ಗೆದ್ದರು.
    ನಿಮ್ಮೆಲ್ಲರಿಗೂ ಶುಭಾಶಯಗಳು.

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    1. ನಿಮಗೆ ನಮ್ಮ ಮನಃಪೂರ್ವಕ ಧನ್ಯವಾದ,,,

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  25. suraiya very heart touching story i think you will also become like uncle one day- manu

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  27. Excellent writing, the words she has chosen and put up are really great....Very good thought for this age...Your literature is very good suru....God bless u...
    Memorable gift for silver jubilee...
    ಸರ್,
    ಓದಿ ಕಣ್ಣು ಜಿನುಗಿತು....ಹೃದಯ ಸ್ಪರ್ಶ ಬರಹ....
    ದೇವರು ನಿಮ್ಮ ಸಂಸಾರವನ್ನು ಸದಾ ಸುಖ ಸಂತೋಷದಿಂದ ಇರಿಸಲಿ...

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    1. Thanks Mahesh... Your blessings will always be encouraging positives for her. Thanks for wishing us as well.

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  28. ಬೆಳೆಯುವ ಸಿರಿ ಮೊಳಕೆಯಲ್ಲಿ ಅನ್ನುವುದನ್ನು ಈ ಕಥೆ ನಿರೂಪಿಸುತ್ತದೆ...ಪುಟಾಣಿ ಅಜಾದ್ (ಸುರಯ) ದೊಡ್ಡ ಅಜಾದ್ ರವರ ಮಟ್ಟಕ್ಕೆ ಏರಲೇಂದು ಹಾರೈಸುವೆ...

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    1. ಧನ್ಯವಾದ ಹಾರೈಕೆಗೆ ಮತ್ತು ಸುರುಗೆ ನೀಡಿದ ಆಶೀರ್ವಾದಕ್ಕೆ...

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  29. wah Sir! Suru has so much love for you in her little heart.. I loved the way she has put it. Wonderful..
    Belated anniversary wishes to you and love to Suru :)

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  30. Thank you Sushma for your good comments and wishes..

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  31. Very heart touching , nothing can be more valuable than this writing for parents

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